Saturday, October 13, 2007

Friday 5 poem

Gears of War
Bloodshot eyes rolling through
Pinion soldiers grinding gears of war
Endless movements of gypsy travel
Devastation hangs in heavy mizzen
Beckons forever thirsty for conquer

5 comments:

Scott Clawson said...

Friday 5 is a challenge left by Michelle at Poefusion every Friday to make a poem out of 5 random words.......fun & challenging.

Michelle Johnson said...

Your poem wasn't so much dark as it was accurate. I wish the troops didn't have to endure such hardship/sadness. But, I tip my hat to anyone who faces what they do everyday. Thanks for sharing such a nice poem. Keep up the good work.

Have a nice day.
Michelle

Jo said...

An interesting run with the words.

tumblewords said...

I agree with Michelle - Not so dark as it is accurate - but very nicely done with the prompt!

Scott Clawson said...

Thank you michelle, jo and tunblewords for your words of encouragement!

Scott