Your poem wasn't so much dark as it was accurate. I wish the troops didn't have to endure such hardship/sadness. But, I tip my hat to anyone who faces what they do everyday. Thanks for sharing such a nice poem. Keep up the good work.
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Friday 5 is a challenge left by Michelle at Poefusion every Friday to make a poem out of 5 random words.......fun & challenging.
Your poem wasn't so much dark as it was accurate. I wish the troops didn't have to endure such hardship/sadness. But, I tip my hat to anyone who faces what they do everyday. Thanks for sharing such a nice poem. Keep up the good work.
Have a nice day.
Michelle
An interesting run with the words.
I agree with Michelle - Not so dark as it is accurate - but very nicely done with the prompt!
Thank you michelle, jo and tunblewords for your words of encouragement!
Scott
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