Tuesday, October 30, 2007

Endless Quest (Quatern)


Quietly passing through heavy blackness
Soft spoken whispers of an ancient past
Silently gliding in breathless movement
Mysterious creatures abiding within

Centuries abroad these traveling vagabonds
Quietly passing through heavy blackness
Endlessly searching far flung reaches
Unflinching sacrifice of sorrowed souls

Longing for days long since past
Renewing vigor for unspoken dreams
Quietly passing through heavy blackness
Restless in heart of unfailing dedication

Children of light and of stardust
Wayward bound for all eternity
Forever flowing on swift solar winds
Quietly passing through heavy blackness

2 comments:

Michelle Johnson said...

You hit the Quatern dead on. I didn't even have my example up yet, either. Wow! I really liked this poem. You kept a nice flow throughout. You put my example to shame. I might have to redo mine now. Keep up the good work.

Have a nice night.
Michelle

Thank you for your kind words about my poem Buterfleoge.

Jo said...

Oooh, great finish

Forever flowing on swift solar winds
Quietly passing through heavy blackness


Lovely image!