Anniversary Get-Away
10 years ago
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Captain of this leaky vessel
- J. S. Clawson
- Gwynn's Island, Virginia, United States
- I live on a small island in the Chesapeake Bay with my lovely bride of 35 years. If you are ever sailing by, be sure to drop anchor and experience a little of our island paradise!
My Darling Bride
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2 comments:
I really like this Scott. The only thing I noticed was the first four words not rhyming. Did you intentionally decide not to rhyme them? In that case, I see nothing wrong with this poem at all. Well done, my friend. Have a nice night.
Ooops! Actually I had in mind from the beginning a nautical them and was unable to come up with four descriptive words that rhymed syllabically. These were closest I could get, at least they all end in 'ing'! :-) Thanks for commenting and thanks for your prompts, I love them!
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