Saturday, September 6, 2008

Sailing Barque (Tyburn)





Sailing barque, reaching, tacking upward.

Minding her rigging, sailing onward.


Michelle Johnson said...

I really like this Scott. The only thing I noticed was the first four words not rhyming. Did you intentionally decide not to rhyme them? In that case, I see nothing wrong with this poem at all. Well done, my friend. Have a nice night.

Scott Clawson said...

Ooops! Actually I had in mind from the beginning a nautical them and was unable to come up with four descriptive words that rhymed syllabically. These were closest I could get, at least they all end in 'ing'! :-) Thanks for commenting and thanks for your prompts, I love them!