Scott, your lune & picture conjure memories of my childhood. Many a night I would catch lightning bugs and place them inside a jar whose lid was poked with several holes for them to breath. They still died though or escaped. Thank you for stopping by Poefusion today. Your lune was a delight to read. Have a nice night.
I live on a small island in the Chesapeake Bay with my lovely bride of 35 years. If you are ever sailing by, be sure to drop anchor and experience a little of our island paradise!
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Scott, your lune & picture conjure memories of my childhood. Many a night I would catch lightning bugs and place them inside a jar whose lid was poked with several holes for them to breath. They still died though or escaped. Thank you for stopping by Poefusion today. Your lune was a delight to read. Have a nice night.
Oh wow! Imagery is excellent in this piece.
I love the way your lune is tightly bound together by the internal rhymes and the alliteration.
Every word is a burst of image!
Dynamic!
Gemma
hi scott... good to see you on poefusion!!!! i miss fireflies... we had then in ohio when i was a kid... but none here in north cali
Did you write more about the
firefly?
Did I miss it?
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