Monday, April 7, 2008

Firefly (Lune)


Firefly From The Sky

Blinking Bright

Freedom Borne Through Glass

6 comments:

poefusion said...

Scott, your lune & picture conjure memories of my childhood. Many a night I would catch lightning bugs and place them inside a jar whose lid was poked with several holes for them to breath. They still died though or escaped. Thank you for stopping by Poefusion today. Your lune was a delight to read. Have a nice night.

Unknown said...

Oh wow! Imagery is excellent in this piece.

Anonymous said...

I love the way your lune is tightly bound together by the internal rhymes and the alliteration.

Gemma Wiseman said...

Every word is a burst of image!

Dynamic!

Gemma

paisley said...

hi scott... good to see you on poefusion!!!! i miss fireflies... we had then in ohio when i was a kid... but none here in north cali

rio11 said...

Did you write more about the
firefly?


Did I miss it?