Friday, November 23, 2007

Together (Nonet)



My love abounds through the distant stars

With you by my side we will soar

Touching new worlds of wonder

Endlessly exploring

Forever loving

Hearts intertwined

Sharing fate

True love

Lives

4 comments:

poefusion said...

You should dedicate that one to your wife because it is so genuine. I really liked this and the way you shaped it. Small change in the first line is needed though. I think you meant through instead of throught. Otherwise, great job. Keep up the good work.

It was nice to see you over at Poefusion again. Loved your comment on my Nonet. Thanks for the well wishes.

Have a nice day.

J. S. Clawson said...

Thanks for catching the mispell! Shame on me for not using the spell check!

All of my poems dealing with love are dedicated to my wife because she inspires every one and every word. She is the one traveling with me, my soul mate. Trust me, there are a couple of poems unpublished, never to be published, which I dedicate solely to her.

Thanks again for the kind comments.

Scott

Anonymous said...

Scott, this is beautiful - and poetic, a joy to read.

writerwoman said...

Hi!

Your assigned day for The Twelve Days of Poetry is December 20th.

It is up to you which poem of yours you submit.

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Sara

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